Read Johnny's, Kelsey's, Renee's, and Jojo's story starter and add your sentences.....
There once was a detective who used to be a scientist who studied fossils. He would study them to see if the animals who left the imprint were extinct, but one day he realized how it would be to be a detective so he became a detective.(KF) The sleuth woke up that morning, feeling quite parody and humorous. (KD) He quickly realized that itbecame late morning when he hadbawoken and had to meteoricly get changed and be prepared for the upcoming day. (KD)
The sleuth was walking in his town to see if anything wierd was happening, and he passed by a theater where people was performing a parody of a show, suddenly he was in a dark alley.
The sleuth saw the burly man amble down the dark alley.
The man wasn't supposed to amble down the alley this late at night. (KS)
He was very hungry and he was about to stop and replenish himself, but then he decided to investigate. (MM)
As he turned his head he saw that the man`s face was distorted because his eye was on his chin.(AB)
The sight was so meteoric that the sleuth almost fainted. (KS)
The sleuth thought he saw this man before and he remembered that he had dogged determination so he was hard to catch. (CM)
He looked like a man that that would commit crimes of vandalism.(AB)
He wondered if he should call for back up because the man was burly and, the sleuth was only a small and weak man.(JG)
The sleuth had an alias so that he could investigate things without people knowing who he was. (BM)
He also had a secret code ingrained into a piece of paper so that he could get into secret places. (BM) He could amble to any place and open any door and he would never get cought.(JC) The man seemed to be full of grit as he walked down into the alley, then the sleuth said to himself, "I must find out what is going on in this alley and I have to prevail." (AA) When the sleuth walked down the alley, he was so dumbfounded that the burly man was leaving a paint trail of his feet. The sleuth wondered, It is inevitable that the burly man would be found because of the paint tracks.(KB) Even a beginner sleuth could find him.(KB)
He must be here to vandalize the city, and he will prevail unless I try to stop him, the man thought.(ER)
It was ineviatable that he was on his way to do something bad.(JC)
When he walked out Carl was standing by the door, ready to kill the man. The man slapped him and ran away. The man knew he would never give up, and he should be ready next time this would happen. He knew he was messing with a dogged man! (AD)
But the sleuth was afraid that if he didn't run away, the criminal might try to rend him. (MM)
The sleuth's first thought was to replenish himself. (AD)
So the sleuth went home and rummaged through his attic to see if he could find his old detective kit. (CM)
He relized that the kit might be extinct but then he saw something in a pile of grit. (Jh)
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You can add your sentences anywhere in the story, as long as it makes sense and does not disrupt the flow of the story.
You may use any font size or color (nothing too big, please).
Use correct spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar.
Put your initials at the end of the sentences
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Unit 10 NICK'S STORY PROMPT:
The robbers formulated a rigorous plan to rob thebank. Carmelo was the leader of the robbers, and he was known for being a very abominable criminal. Like always they needed to formulate a plan before they go. Carmelo knew his bumbling partners would get caught so he planed to do most of the work. Carmelo also drew a panorama so he and his partners knew exactly where the guards and vault were. Carmelo decided to take the initiative and decided to enter the bank first. The first step was for the robbers to look at the panorama of the bank so they can sneek in without getting caught. Their second step was to to pry the door open so they could get into the bank.Once Carmelo would pry the door open, he would call the look out man, using his refurbished cell-phone to make sure nobody was watching them. When they were in, Carmelo realized his friend was a nonconformist because he was to scared to steal the money. Carmelo abominably said "if you want to chicken out go ahead but you don't get any of the money," so his quickly left making sure no one saw him. Their final step was to go into the vault of the bank and Carmelo would dole out money to each of the robbers to take to put in each of their bags. They really thought they were going to getting away with this delude plan.The robbers plan had to be subseqent and perfect because it was an important bank, that had lots of money and gold. At first Carmelo thought when they got to the bank his group would just start bumbling and not listening to the plan, but he then realized his rigorous plan had to work. The robbers knew that they would delude any cops who came in thier way, while robbing the bank. Subsequently, they thought they were ready to rob the bank.They needed the money because they were engulfed in such worn out clothes. Carmelo knew that if this rigorous robbing went well, it would leave a memento in every one of his friend's minds. However, one time they got caught when they were robbing a different bank and that left a dull memento in their mind.Carmelo said that if anyone talked about that dull memento again, there will be rigorous consequences.Carmelo and his crew did not know they were about to do null and void things when they were about to rob the bank. Their head leader, Carmelo has a history of being an abominable man. Carmelo always does does null and void things but he never gets cought. Carmelo and his gang were always unerring, they have never been cought once before. "Our plan is never to be foiled" says Carmelo. Carmelo and his crew, knew that all of their plans to rob the bank were unerring. Carmelo and his crew plan out a plan and gather materials that will be resourceful to the enviorment.Carmelo felt he was doing this for posterity.Carmelo was a nonconformist who only cared about him and his crew. He had to delude everyone or else he could get caught.Although sometimes during their robberies Carmelo and the crew are known for bumbling around. Whenever there is a problem while robbing the bank, Carmelo being the resourceful man he is, always has a sceme do they don't get caught. But Carmelo did know that if he did get caught, there would be many consequences he did not want to face. So Carmelo's initiative step was to leave and drive over to the bank, but while he was in his truck he soon realized that he was engulfed by police trucks, then someone shouted,"Our plan is foiled, Carmelo!" Carmelo did not know what to do! The robbers did not have an escape plan because they believed their plan was so great that it would never be foiled. So Billy Bob Joe, one of Carmelo's fellow robbers, took the initiative to start fighting the police.
The police knew that Carmelo was going to be violent because ,when he was born, his posterity was known for crime and getting in to trouble.Carmelo thought that when they left the bank they would be engulfed with money, but since the police caught them they didn't.The police were able to catch the robbers because the police formulated an extensive plan. They were resourceful and looked at other bank robberies to understand how robbers operate.The police had unerring judgement and that is how they caught the robbers. They felt bad because they knew this act would affect posterity.They should of refribished their plan and looked at the panorama of the outcomes.The consequences gave them dole money, large fines, and a lifetime in jail.
UNIT 2 PICTURE PROMPT
This picture is your writing prompt for this week's vocabulary story. Follow the same directions. Mrs. Chandler will write the first sentence and everyone has to add to it. All sentences are due by Thursday night.
There once was a weird old grampa named Ike, he was on his way to pick his granddaughter up from a book club, because their mom and dad had to work. It was pouring rain, and so it was VERY slippery. Ike almost crashed while he was trying to mimic his mean old wife, who was ill and VERY bossy!(AD) After he fell, when he was on the ground, his shirt got all ruffled.(JC)
After he picked up his granddaughter he drove her to the dollar store and she had to pick out the one thing that he adversed. (KD)
Ike arrived home and got in another fight with his wife Georgette, at this point Ike's patience level was at it's maximum, so he decided to take a long nap, to get away from the wife, and her crazy arguments!(AD) He woke up in the middle of his nap and he was sheepish about his fall, then he went back to bed.(JC)
The elderly man awoke from his restless nap only to see with his tired eyes an incomprehensible sight! A scarlet wooden ladder and was reaching for the serene heavens above. (Mrs. C.)
He climbed up the ladder and then he did not have the stamina to climb down
Then he felt constrained because everyone there was looking at him and they were very quiet.(KB)
He felt sort of sheepish because he didn't know what to do. (KS)
He was very tired and embarrased, and he didn't think he had the stamina to climb back down. (KS) It was incomprehensible because he thought he was dreaming. (RG)
He constrained himself to the ladder so he wouldn't fall off. (RG)
Before he began to climb down, a little girl in a pink dress with ruffles on the edge spoke to him. She said,"You are not dreaming, Ike. Welcome to heaven!" (MM)
I didn't know what to think she could even be an asailant.[mc]
At first Ike was very disinterested at what the little girl had to say but when she said he was in heaven he became speechless. (ER)
Suddenly, Ike's mouth became very arid, and he could barely speak. Then, he said, "Heaven? You mean, I'm dead? How did this happen?" (MM)
Ike then thought did he get in a car crash on my way his home from picking up his granddaughter it was so incomprehensible?(BM)
Or mabe I died from my maximum age?
Ike thought "Was I killed by an assailant who entered my house?" (HS)
I remembered confronting him in the hallway. (HS) Then, Ike thougth maybe his manipulative wife had told the little girl to do this to annoy Ike. (KF)
Ike didnt know what to do he was so incomprehensible.
He knew Georgette would do that because she is a hypocrite. (KF)
She just always ruffles my
Ike knew his adverse wife would do this, it was so obvious! (CM)
The little girl said to him "Come stay awhile" and confront some of the people. (KD)
While a man started mimicing him. NIV He said "Okay I'll stay for a little" because it was so serene where he was. (BM) He climed the ladder as he confronted her.She said,"Ike come into the room of heaven and you shall see the dead." ( JMG)
Ike looked across the room to see who eles was there when all the sudden he saw his wife Georgette standing there emcompassed by people. (ER)
This made it even more incomprehensible ( Ab)
It looked like Georgett was mimicing Ike.(Jh)
Ike said "Georgett I dont have the stamina to deal with this"(Jh)
Then he thought did that assailant kill my wife too! Then he looked next to him and saw an angel mimicking him. MLB
He went over to his wife Georgette and asked "Did the assailant kill you, too?"(BH)
She replied "The assailant used his manipulative ways and tricked me into a trap and then killed me."(BH)
"Oh, that's just great!" Ike said, "I am now dead and death should be a happy thing. Not when you are stuck with your incomprehensible wife!" (CM) The clouds were suddenly filled with a billow of angels(ab). The heavens looked so depict. Then all of the angels began to whisper "there he is, that's him!" Ike was so confused, but then the most serenest man was walking down a staircase made of clouds, but at the top was a gate where Jesus, God ,saints and all the apostles live.(AA) Ike was amazed at what he saw, so he confronted God and said "Hello, do you know who I am? (JSG) God said "Yes, your name is Ike." Ike said "Do you know why the assailant killed me?" (JSG)
"Your assailant was that arid Jimmy Gabes, I guess he really didn't like you and your wife".[mc]
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UNIT 1 SCARY STORYIt was Halloween, after school all the children ran home and instantaneously got into their costumes. (MM)
Just as my friend came to my door with his very inept costume, I've finished making candy apples and we each had one.(KD)
But I think my costume was way more ingenious.NIV
After I donned my scary Halloween apparel, I set outside into the misty dark night with my friends. (Mrs. C.)
As I was outside waiting for my other friend, 2 boys came over and denounced us for our pirate costumes.(AD)
When we got to the first house we instantaneously huddled together. (HS) When we knocked on the door someone jumped out at us and we receded. (HS) After we thought that we were far enough away we stopped and caught our breath,one of my friends said that she thought that he was going to dispatch us! (KD) We told her that it could be a libel idea, because he could be offering us candy.(JSG) But once we saw the man chasing us in his scary outfit with a machete, we headed straight for the woods, which looked very misgiving. (JSG)
We realized we probably should not get anywhere near this unasual man again or we'd probably get in a gainful amount of trouble, for this man seemed very dangerous!(AD) The man was so scary he looked like he wanted to dispatch us. [mc] I felt like an oaf to think that we were safe, because the man was trying to hurt us! (KS) Then our friend knew for sure that she wanted to forsaken us. (ER) My friend was very libel for not telling me there was a guy with a machete behind me.(JH) When we were in the woods my friend was misgiving with the directions to get out. (JH) After, we reached the edge of the woods people jumped out at started besieging us! (BM)
The guy with the machette was an immense man. (JC)
He was the bigest oaf i have every seen in my entaire life.(JMG)
I was scared when he called his freinds and told them to beseige me.(JC) We were all very hungry so we all sat down and reapasted over our candy, untill there was none left! (ER)
Then we were not famish any more but we were still thirsty.
Then we went out to get more candy then we got so tired that we fell down itwas verry inept of us! [KB] We thought we entered a very gainful neighborhood, but we realized it was the haunted mansion. (CM) Then we went back into the house and we saw the guy guy with the machete at the table and it was so anoying and we wanted to dispatch him. [KB] Looking at the man with the machete, his costume was very ingenious.(BH) I expressly said "Lets get out of here before he trys to kill us again."(BH) My friend denounced me of leading her here and getting her into this mess. (CM) By the time we got back, we were very tired and famished from running away from the man. (KS)
When we decided we would go to another house we were doused in water by my mean neighbor.(KF)
Now our Halloween apparel is soaked. (RG)
That mean neighbor really irks us. (RG)I expressly looked at him.niv
I thought that was so inept of him!!! After we receded we decided to go to more houses. When we arived at one creepy house we knocked on the door and shouted "trick or treat!" instantaneoulsythe door opened it was the man with machete opened the door we screamed and ran away.(AA)We were so scared that we immediately receded back to our houses. (MM)
After I got home I compressed all my candy into a bowl.(AB)After reminiscing about our night I doused my candy with milk and ate it.(AB) We ate the immense amount of candy we had and got sick because we had so much! (BM) What we thought would have been a long and fun night had really been compressed! (KF)
Directions: Using 2 vocabulary words from our Vocabulary Workshop Book (Unit 11), add 2 sentences to the class story.
There once was a detective who used to be a scientist who studied fossils. He would study them to see if the animals who left the imprint were extinct, but one day he realized how it would be to be a detective so he became a detective.(KF)
The sleuth woke up that morning, feeling quite parody and humorous. (KD)
He quickly realized that itbecame late morning when he hadbawoken and had to meteoricly get changed and be prepared for the upcoming day. (KD)
The sleuth was walking in his town to see if anything wierd was happening, and he passed by a theater where people was performing a parody of a show, suddenly he was in a dark alley.The sleuth saw the burly man amble down the dark alley.
The man wasn't supposed to amble down the alley this late at night. (KS)
He was very hungry and he was about to stop and replenish himself, but then he decided to investigate. (MM)
As he turned his head he saw that the man`s face was distorted because his eye was on his chin.(AB)
The sight was so meteoric that the sleuth almost fainted. (KS)
The sleuth thought he saw this man before and he remembered that he had dogged determination so he was hard to catch. (CM)
He looked like a man that that would commit crimes of vandalism.(AB)
He wondered if he should call for back up because the man was burly and, the sleuth was only a small and weak man.(JG)
The sleuth had an alias so that he could investigate things without people knowing who he was. (BM)
He also had a secret code ingrained into a piece of paper so that he could get into secret places. (BM)He could amble to any place and open any door and he would never get cought.(JC)
The man seemed to be full of grit as he walked down into the alley, then the sleuth said to himself, "I must find out what is going on in this alley and I have to prevail." (AA)
When the sleuth walked down the alley, he was so dumbfounded that the burly man was leaving a paint trail of his feet. The sleuth wondered,
It is inevitable that the burly man would be found because of the paint tracks.(KB)
Even a beginner sleuth could find him.(KB)
He must be here to vandalize the city, and he will prevail unless I try to stop him, the man thought.(ER)
It was ineviatable that he was on his way to do something bad.(JC)
When he walked out Carl was standing by the door, ready to kill the man. The man slapped him and ran away. The man knew he would never give up, and he should be ready next time this would happen. He knew he was messing with a dogged man! (AD)
But the sleuth was afraid that if he didn't run away, the criminal might try to rend him. (MM)
The sleuth's first thought was to replenish himself. (AD)
So the sleuth went home and rummaged through his attic to see if he could find his old detective kit. (CM)
He relized that the kit might be extinct but then he saw something in a pile of grit. (Jh)
Remember to read what others have written before adding your own.
You can add your sentences anywhere in the story, as long as it makes sense and does not disrupt the flow of the story.
You may use any font size or color (nothing too big, please).
Use correct spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar.
Unit 10 NICK'S STORY PROMPT:
The robbers formulated a rigorous plan to rob the bank. Carmelo was the leader of the robbers, and he was known for being a very abominable criminal. Like always they needed to formulate a plan before they go. Carmelo knew his bumbling partners would get caught so he planed to do most of the work. Carmelo also drew a panorama so he and his partners knew exactly where the guards and vault were. Carmelo decided to take the initiative and decided to enter the bank first. The first step was for the robbers to look at the panorama of the bank so they can sneek in without getting caught. Their second step was to to pry the door open so they could get into the bank.Once Carmelo would pry the door open, he would call the look out man, using his refurbished cell-phone to make sure nobody was watching them. When they were in, Carmelo realized his friend was a nonconformist because he was to scared to steal the money. Carmelo abominably said "if you want to chicken out go ahead but you don't get any of the money," so his quickly left making sure no one saw him. Their final step was to go into the vault of the bank and Carmelo would dole out money to each of the robbers to take to put in each of their bags. They really thought they were going to getting away with this delude plan.The robbers plan had to be subseqent and perfect because it was an important bank, that had lots of money and gold. At first Carmelo thought when they got to the bank his group would just start bumbling and not listening to the plan, but he then realized his rigorous plan had to work. The robbers knew that they would delude any cops who came in thier way, while robbing the bank. Subsequently, they thought they were ready to rob the bank.They needed the money because they were engulfed in such worn out clothes. Carmelo knew that if this rigorous robbing went well, it would leave a memento in every one of his friend's minds. However, one time they got caught when they were robbing a different bank and that left a dull memento in their mind.Carmelo said that if anyone talked about that dull memento again, there will be rigorous consequences.Carmelo and his crew did not know they were about to do null and void things when they were about to rob the bank. Their head leader, Carmelo has a history of being an abominable man. Carmelo always does does null and void things but he never gets cought. Carmelo and his gang were always unerring, they have never been cought once before. "Our plan is never to be foiled" says Carmelo. Carmelo and his crew, knew that all of their plans to rob the bank were unerring. Carmelo and his crew plan out a plan and gather materials that will be resourceful to the enviorment.Carmelo felt he was doing this for posterity.Carmelo was a nonconformist who only cared about him and his crew. He had to delude everyone or else he could get caught.Although sometimes during their robberies Carmelo and the crew are known for bumbling around. Whenever there is a problem while robbing the bank, Carmelo being the resourceful man he is, always has a sceme do they don't get caught. But Carmelo did know that if he did get caught, there would be many consequences he did not want to face. So Carmelo's initiative step was to leave and drive over to the bank, but while he was in his truck he soon realized that he was engulfed by police trucks, then someone shouted,"Our plan is foiled, Carmelo!" Carmelo did not know what to do! The robbers did not have an escape plan because they believed their plan was so great that it would never be foiled. So Billy Bob Joe, one of Carmelo's fellow robbers, took the initiative to start fighting the police.
The police knew that Carmelo was going to be violent because ,when he was born, his posterity was known for crime and getting in to trouble.Carmelo thought that when they left the bank they would be engulfed with money, but since the police caught them they didn't.The police were able to catch the robbers because the police formulated an extensive plan. They were resourceful and looked at other bank robberies to understand how robbers operate.The police had unerring judgement and that is how they caught the robbers. They felt bad because they knew this act would affect posterity.They should of refribished their plan and looked at the panorama of the outcomes.The consequences gave them dole money, large fines, and a lifetime in jail.
UNIT 2 PICTURE PROMPT
This picture is your writing prompt for this week's vocabulary story. Follow the same directions. Mrs. Chandler will write the first sentence and everyone has to add to it. All sentences are due by Thursday night.There once was a weird old grampa named Ike, he was on his way to pick his granddaughter up from a book club, because their mom and dad had to work. It was pouring rain, and so it was VERY slippery. Ike almost crashed while he was trying to mimic his mean old wife, who was ill and VERY bossy!(AD)
After he fell, when he was on the ground, his shirt got all ruffled.(JC)
After he picked up his granddaughter he drove her to the dollar store and she had to pick out the one thing that he adversed. (KD)
Ike arrived home and got in another fight with his wife Georgette, at this point Ike's patience level was at it's maximum, so he decided to take a long nap, to get away from the wife, and her crazy arguments!(AD)
He woke up in the middle of his nap and he was sheepish about his fall, then he went back to bed.(JC)
The elderly man awoke from his restless nap only to see with his tired eyes an incomprehensible sight! A scarlet wooden ladder and was reaching for the serene heavens above. (Mrs. C.)
He climbed up the ladder and then he did not have the stamina to climb down
Then he felt constrained because everyone there was looking at him and they were very quiet.(KB)
He felt sort of sheepish because he didn't know what to do. (KS)
He was very tired and embarrased, and he didn't think he had the stamina to climb back down. (KS)
It was incomprehensible because he thought he was dreaming. (RG)
He constrained himself to the ladder so he wouldn't fall off. (RG)
Before he began to climb down, a little girl in a pink dress with ruffles on the edge spoke to him. She said,"You are not dreaming, Ike. Welcome to heaven!" (MM)
I didn't know what to think she could even be an asailant.[mc]
At first Ike was very disinterested at what the little girl had to say but when she said he was in heaven he became speechless. (ER)Suddenly, Ike's mouth became very arid, and he could barely speak. Then, he said, "Heaven? You mean, I'm dead? How did this happen?" (MM)
Ike then thought did he get in a car crash on my way his home from picking up his granddaughter it was so incomprehensible?(BM)
Or mabe I died from my maximum age?
Ike thought "Was I killed by an assailant who entered my house?" (HS)
I remembered confronting him in the hallway. (HS)
Then, Ike thougth maybe his manipulative wife had told the little girl to do this to annoy Ike. (KF)
Ike didnt know what to do he was so incomprehensible.
He knew Georgette would do that because she is a hypocrite. (KF)
She just always ruffles my
Ike knew his adverse wife would do this, it was so obvious! (CM)
The little girl said to him "Come stay awhile" and confront some of the people. (KD)
While a man started mimicing him. NIV
He said "Okay I'll stay for a little" because it was so serene where he was. (BM)
He climed the ladder as he confronted her.She said,"Ike come into the room of heaven and you shall see the dead." ( JMG)
Ike looked across the room to see who eles was there when all the sudden he saw his wife Georgette standing there emcompassed by people. (ER)
This made it even more incomprehensible ( Ab)
It looked like Georgett was mimicing Ike.(Jh)
Ike said "Georgett I dont have the stamina to deal with this"(Jh)
Then he thought did that assailant kill my wife too! Then he looked next to him and saw an angel mimicking him. MLB
He went over to his wife Georgette and asked "Did the assailant kill you, too?"(BH)
She replied "The assailant used his manipulative ways and tricked me into a trap and then killed me."(BH)
"Oh, that's just great!" Ike said, "I am now dead and death should be a happy thing. Not when you are stuck with your incomprehensible wife!" (CM)
The clouds were suddenly filled with a billow of angels(ab).
The heavens looked so depict. Then all of the angels began to whisper "there he is, that's him!" Ike was so confused, but then the most
serenest man was walking down a staircase made of clouds, but at the top was a gate where Jesus, God ,saints and all the apostles live.(AA)
Ike was amazed at what he saw, so he confronted God and said "Hello, do you know who I am? (JSG)
God said "Yes, your name is Ike." Ike said "Do you know why the assailant killed me?" (JSG)
"Your assailant was that arid Jimmy Gabes, I guess he really didn't like you and your wife".[mc]
_ * PLEASE DO NOT DELETE PAST UNIT STORIES YOU HAVE WRITTEN BELOW.
UNIT 1 SCARY STORY It was Halloween, after school all the children ran home and instantaneously got into their costumes. (MM)
Just as my friend came to my door with his very inept costume, I've finished making candy apples and we each had one.(KD)
But I think my costume was way more ingenious.NIV
After I donned my scary Halloween apparel, I set outside into the misty dark night with my friends. (Mrs. C.)As I was outside waiting for my other friend, 2 boys came over and denounced us for our pirate costumes.(AD)
When we got to the first house we instantaneously huddled together. (HS)When we knocked on the door someone jumped out at us and we receded. (HS)
After we thought that we were far enough away we stopped and caught our breath,one of my friends said that she thought that he was going to dispatch us! (KD)
We told her that it could be a libel idea, because he could be offering us candy.(JSG)
But once we saw the man chasing us in his scary outfit with a machete, we headed straight for the woods, which looked very misgiving. (JSG)
We realized we probably should not get anywhere near this unasual man again or we'd probably get in a gainful amount of trouble, for this man seemed very dangerous!(AD)
The man was so scary he looked like he wanted to dispatch us. [mc]
I felt like an oaf to think that we were safe, because the man was trying to hurt us! (KS)
Then our friend knew for sure that she wanted to forsaken us. (ER)
My friend was very libel for not telling me there was a guy with a machete behind me.(JH)
When we were in the woods my friend was misgiving with the directions to get out. (JH)
After, we reached the edge of the woods people jumped out at started besieging us! (BM)
The guy with the machette was an immense man. (JC)
He was the bigest oaf i have every seen in my entaire life.(JMG)
I was scared when he called his freinds and told them to beseige me.(JC)We were all very hungry so we all sat down and reapasted over our candy, untill there was none left! (ER)
Then we were not famish any more but we were still thirsty.
Then we went out to get more candy then we got so tired that we fell down it was verry inept of us! [KB]We thought we entered a very gainful neighborhood, but we realized it was the haunted mansion. (CM)
Then we went back into the house and we saw the guy guy with the machete at the table and it was so anoying and we wanted to dispatch him. [KB]
Looking at the man with the machete, his costume was very ingenious.(BH)
I expressly said "Lets get out of here before he trys to kill us again."(BH)
My friend denounced me of leading her here and getting her into this mess. (CM)
By the time we got back, we were very tired and famished from running away from the man. (KS)
When we decided we would go to another house we were doused in water by my mean neighbor.(KF)
Now our Halloween apparel is soaked. (RG)
That mean neighbor really irks us. (RG)I expressly looked at him.niv
I thought that was so inept of him!!! After we receded we decided to go to more houses. When we arived at one creepy house we knocked on the door and shouted "trick or treat!" instantaneoulsythe door opened it was the man with machete opened the door we screamed and ran away.(AA) We were so scared that we immediately receded back to our houses. (MM)
After I got home I compressed all my candy into a bowl.(AB) After reminiscing about our night I doused my candy with milk and ate it.(AB)We ate the immense amount of candy we had and got sick because we had so much! (BM)
What we thought would have been a long and fun night had really been compressed! (KF)
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